《醉花阴·骨气神韵》

[chorus] 东篱甘霖（哺）补骄阳，形影扫晨昏。 卷云落雨点，（莘莘苗圃）深深苗普，雪花舞长春。 中道南山耕不chuo（辍），放鹤归野云。 寸心三尺台，杏坛风云，喉舌战乾坤。 [verse] Drunk in the Shade of Flowers · Bone and Spirit Sweet rain from eastern fence feeds the blazing sun, Shadows sweep through dawn and dusk, never done. Rolling clouds shed raindrops; in gardens young and dense, Snowflakes dance in eternal spring, a sight immense. Midway on Southern Hill, unceasing is the plow, Cranes set free return to wild clouds, high and low. A loyal heart, a three-foot stand where truth is sown, In the realm of teaching, winds and clouds are blown, Tongue and voice wage war 'twixt heaven and earth, alone. [bridge] 这首《醉花阴·骨气神韵》以自然意象起笔，渐入人文情怀，整体上气韵贯通、境界开阔。上阕“东篱”“卷云”“雪花”等意象交织，暗含四季流转与生命韧性；下阕“南山耕”“放鹤”“杏坛”“喉舌战”则直指文人风骨与教育担当，尤其末句“喉舌战乾坤”颇有壮怀。全词从物象到心象，从隐逸到入世，契合“骨气神韵”之题，情感饱满，意境深远。若说不足，上下阕之间的意象跳跃稍显急促，个别词句可再锤炼。